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Let me be the candle that lights up your world

Let my flame light up the darkness that covers you

Let me show you a bright world whithout fear

Let us use my flame to lit other candles around you
so when my light is fading and my flame is small there still be light around you

Let me show you how to transfer my flame so that my light can be with you even when I'm gone
That way you'll never stay in the dark

Let it be my light that eventually helps you be your own burning candle

Let my flame no longer be needed as you shine with your own light

Let me go without tears falling down your cheek

Let me be remembered as the one who taught you how to shine
Something I wrote around christmas because I couldn't sleep.

I have no idea what kind of poem or whatever you could call it is.

If anyone get what this poem thing really is about please tell me in a comment. I showed this to my sister and she didn't have a clue.
(that means that light,flame and candle, stands for something else)

Also if there are any grammar errors tell me and I'll fix it somehow.
:iconzatarina:
Zatarina Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love it!
I did post it (with a link back ofcourse) on my blog. Hope you don't mind...
Check it out here: [link]
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